Miss Strawberry

began this as a sketch
after seeing my friend draw really amazing and cute anime girls, i realized i want to try too
unfortunately my original style is anything but cute
so this is my first attempt
the eyes were a pain though = 3 =
is it cute enough?
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oh and i think im beginning to search for another style again.
my previous one (which i really do like) is very very flawed, i hope i can perfect it before i give up completely haha
with me luck
pointers and critiques are very much welcome!
but please be brutally honest AND friendly at the same time c: