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Miss Strawberry by Spining Miss Strawberry by Spining
began this as a sketch
after seeing my friend draw really amazing and cute anime girls, i realized i want to try too
unfortunately my original style is anything but cute
so this is my first attempt
the eyes were a pain though = 3 =
is it cute enough? :)
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oh and i think im beginning to search for another style again.
my previous one (which i really do like) is very very flawed, i hope i can perfect it before i give up completely haha
with me luck :D
pointers and critiques are very much welcome!
but please be brutally honest AND friendly at the same time c:
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FazbearClaim Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Professional Writer
Little Pixel Heart w Little Pixel Heart  She is the prettiest girl ever!!! I'm in love.
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takeiteasy-brother Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awwwe looks wonderful, i love the style<333
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Spining Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aww thank you <3
It's much more painful than the style i had before haha c;
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takeiteasy-brother Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well i love it, good work^w^
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Spining Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you are always soo nice c:
thank you ^^
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takeiteasy-brother Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh it's nothing^^ oh, my oc anita managed to get her own profile, if you want to talk to her, she's rather lonely right now^^;
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Spining Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i'd love to chat c:
but uhh, where is she? (or rather, how can i contact her?)
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takeiteasy-brother Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh, her link is in my most recent journal, if you wish^w^
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Spining Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
alrighty, hope she likes me c:
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ochaocha Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
很美哦 :3
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Spining Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
谢谢! c:
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ochaocha Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
welcomeee<3
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Duke-of-the-sea Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice spin! :icongreatjobplz:
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Spining Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank yuuu~
C:
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Duke-of-the-sea Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem :iconblushplz:
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zmote Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
And yes, I forgot, you wanted a critic.


Pros:

I very much like the colors and the unique shading style. Lighting seems right, so do the cast shadows. Awesome hair and golden smile. :)
I also like the shading of the eyes, they pop out very nicely.

Cons:

Well, short version, collarbones pop out to much, you should rethink the line weight of the colar bones; she looks like giraffe, maybe a thicker or shorter throat area? Where are the eyebrows? Upper torso anatomy seems wrong or at least appears weird to me. Line weight around the mouth needs fixing, atm to blurry and thick. Placement of the nostrils lines could be adjusted, it seems like her nose is broken and leaning towards (image)left. Mouth and nose could be moved more upwards, the chin area would pop out more this way. General line weighting errors (for example chin point area)
The left and right hair areas are kinda disproportioned, you suggest more hair on the left side, but the hair area on the right side is bigger, looks weird and makes the face area look smaller than necessary. Where are the lower eyelashes? The eyeball area could need some eyeball cave shading, you know, our eyes are like inside those caves, thus one could show that with appropriate shadow placement.

PS: I know, the con area sounds sassy, but there is no ill-intention, I promise.
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Spining Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ah thank you!
i'll try to improve the next time i draw (which will hopefully be soon) c:
and i completely agree with you, especially the nose haha
it is very tilted indeed.
thank you again for taking the time to help out a fellow artist
please take care!
and i hope my next piece won't disappoint c;
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zmote Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I didn't say this piece disappointed, just for the record. ^^
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Spining Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i know, but i really do want to do better :D
and your comment really helps ^^
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zmote Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm glad to have been of help then.^^
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zmote Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ahhw, so cute, want to cuddle and give her a pat on the head.
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iceykitty27 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012
Asjisdhsud She's so cute. ;u;
I really like your anime style, I really do. ;w; In fact, I'm a little bit jealous of it. The only thing that I would recommend is making the eyes in a more comfortable style. .3. Trust me, eyes aren't as easy as they look. =3=

Did I ever tell you that I adore your coloring style? :'D
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Spining Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
asdfahjksdh thank you > u <
i agree with you on the eyes, haha back to the drawing board ;)
i think your art is completely amazing and i like it very much! c:
my colouring style is equivalent to scribbles of colour on a piece of paper, it's both messy and blotchy XD
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iceykitty27 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012
You're welcome~ c:
Asdfghjkl; thank you. ;w;
Aw, but it looks really nice in my opinion. c:
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G4MM43T4 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
she is soo cute, its ridiculous
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Spining Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha thank you :)
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G4MM43T4 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem, random citizen
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